Sunday, May 11, 2008

Blurred Images

Snapshots
by Paul Buchannan

Even before she was gone, she was fading.
Like a Polaroid in reverse, Jimmy’s best friend is disappearing before his eyes. She’s been getting the kind of looks that girls get, but from strangers, boys and grown men, for years.
Jimmy still can pass for a twelve-year-old at the movies, and he’s fifteen.

She’s started to ask him favors… to lie for her. Jimmy knows he shouldn’t, knows that she’s meeting men she’s met on the internet. Jimmy also knows deep down how this story will end. But he can’t stop things. He’s not allowed close enough.

Jimmy loved her in every light, from every angle. His camera loved her, too, and some of the most beautiful shots he ever framed were of her. He would frame her up, stare at her, click the shutter, reaching…

And then, she was gone, and the world Jimmy knew when he looked at her vanished, too.

After the huge 12 acre blaze Jimmy started in the canyon, his mother is afraid of him. His psychologist doesn’t really seem to care what he thinks at all. Jimmy, unable to shoot film, unable to cope, finally hits bottom when somebody says he started the fire to cover up evidence that he killed her. But how could he have ever hurt his very best friend?

Wasn’t she already hurting herself enough?

Beautifully told in a quiet “snapshots” of the present in the past, this novel is a haunting and painful collage of a friendship, a love and an inconceivable, inconsolable loss. Without resorting to melodrama or a massive climactic scene, this is also a novel about gathering what is broken, and learning to survive what has gone.


This review was first published in the March/April '08 issue of The Edge of the Forest Children's Literature Monthly.

Having What She Wants

Everything You Want
by Barbara Shoup

“Can you lose a self you haven’t found yet? Do you have to find your true self to be able to let it go?”


High school was only kind of okay – it wasn’t the Best Years of Your Life like it was advertised, and Emma Hammond was fairly glad when it was over. Her freshman year of college isn’t turning out to be too cool, either. Emma’s only company, now that her former best friend Josh Morgan has gone AWOL, is her goose, Freud – well, it’s the Psych Department’s goose, but it was assigned to her. When she finds out Freud’s going to be destroyed after the psychology experiment, she’s got to take him home. He was hers, after all. Freud is all she’s got… now that Josh has punched her in the face and knocked her out. (Long story short: it was just that she was in love with him.

And told him.

It SO didn’t go well.)

When the goose lays a golden egg – almost literally – things change for the whole Hammond family, and it’s fifty million dollars worth of change. Her father’s dream of owning a Corvette – fulfilled. Her mother’s dream of having the art studio of her dreams – fulfilled. Emma wants something intangible, but she’s not sure what. Suddenly, all the things that are wrong with Emma seem …huge. And she’s got to do something about them. After all, money is no object anymore, right?

Who knew that money doesn’t really simplify… anything?

How can you decide what you need when you can have Everything You Want?

Barbara Shoup has written an angsty, funny, poignant novel about confusion and heartache and …life. Read it. Even if you don’t win Lotto Cash afterwards, you’ll be richer for it.


This review was first published in the March/April '08 issue of The Edge of the Forest Children's Literature Monthly.

The Bard's Boy

Spanking Shakespeare
By Jake Wizner

Luckily, Shakespeare Shapiro can write.

That’s kind of his saving grace, that and the really great assignments his English teacher, Mr. Parke, gives him. A talent mixed with his strange name give him the platform he needs to be crowned the constant class clown, cheerfully belittling himself with wildly exaggerated tales of his so-called life. Shakespeare, together with classmates and good buds Neil and Kate, is supposed to be writing his high school memoirs for the final English project of his senior year, but at the same time, he’s not sure he has anything to write about.

The last seventeen years of his life, according to him, have been a string of horrors and humiliations. His parents are oversexed nutjobs who gave him his name in a story because of a conception he would really rather never hear about; his mother is a passive-aggressive shrew, his father a drunk, his little brother, Gandhi, already has a girlfriend, has already smoked pot, and is just so much cooler than Shakespeare that he’s not even sure they’re really related.

In contrast, his life, which he renders humorously in ongoing glimpses of his memoir, consists of being caught with dirty magazines in junior high, being sent to spend time with his grandmother, who is certifiable, getting lost with his dead drunk father in Italy, and having to listen to blow by blow daily accounts of Neil’s bowel habits.

Shakespeare is forever going for the laugh, moaning about his virginity, and the fact that he’s just got to do something to break the mold before high school is over. The whole world is all about him, ad nauseum… until he becomes interested in someone whose life is so radically (and melodramatically) different than his own that it makes him stop and really… for once, shut up. And think.

Maybe it’s not that bad being Shakespeare Shapiro.

This novel is stuffed full of clever repartee and funny zingers – which, unfortunately, isn’t that much like real life in high school. Kind of a wish-fulfillment novel where the author got to turn back the clock and return to a much cooler high school alter ego, Spanking Shakespeare runs toward a slightly clichéd world view. Get past the loud, dumb, but cool jock, the kind of cute, spirited, poor girl, the basic blonde goddess and the funny guy and you’ll find yourself with a lightweight, amusing storyline that drags a little at times, but will keep you mildly amused all the way through. You can whip through this one in an afternoon on the lawn in the sunshine.


This review was first published in the March/April '08 issue of The Edge of the Forest Children's Literature Monthly.

To Be, Or... Not To

…Or Not?
by Brian Mandabach


“You have to love your whole life, Cassie. Each moment is the only thing that’s real. If you damn even one moment, you risk damning the whole thing. Think about it. Each moment arises and then slips away so quickly – if you’re not living in the present, if you’re living in the past or for the future, you’ll miss it, because now happens only once.”


It’s more than good advice. It’s the best advice Cassie Sullivan’s ever heard. Unfortunately, by the time she hears it, she’s already shot herself in the foot.

From her staunch refusal to listen to CD’s because ‘digital music sounds robotic,’ and isn’t real, to her strict vegan diet, to her hatred for suburban life and her longing to live alone in the woods, Cassie is an original. Brilliant, moody, perceptive and interested in truly thinking about world events, Cassie has gotten dangerously bored in school, especially since her defense of Darwin has gotten her labeled as the school antichrist, and her refusal to sing so-called “patriotic” songs for a September 11th Memorial assembly has gotten her nicknamed ‘Osama O’Sullivan’ and kicked out of show choir. In a fever of what they assume is patriotism, Cassie’s classmates react, and make her life a nightmare. Cassie withdraws into her journal, rereading Tolkien and the writing of Kurt Cobain, and writing stories which concern the adults around her.

Even if she’s the school outcast, she can survive the hundreds of notes shoved into her locker, the hazing the abuse, and losing her few friends. Even if the teachers don’t like her and her parents aren’t sure what’s up with her, she can survive, right? But the question ringing in Cassie’s head asks if anything is worth the hassle – if anything good remains to be saved, if anyone still has a conscience, a heart, and a brain in the hypersensitive, post-September 11th world around her.
To be, …or not? Suddenly, that’s the only question.

Though Brian Mandabach creates in Cassie a character very unlike the average middle school student, the voice is real. Sarcastic, self-righteous, and idealistic, Cassie struggles with becoming, and also with being brighter than everyone else and despising them – and herself – for various reasons. Themes of depression, prejudice, peer pressure and religious conservatism are familiar territory in YA fiction, but older readers may find that Mandabach allows Cassie and some of her detractors to get off a little too easily. While she has been brought up to be a critical thinker, Cassie is remarkably rigid and refuses to allow that others have reasons for their negative behavior – most notably, fear-- and immaturity makes her miss this – and her own fear, entirely. Still, solid writing and a nonconformist heroine may make Cassie a kindred spirit to other teens fighting toward maturity.


This review was first published in the March/April '08 issue of The Edge of the Forest Children's Literature Monthly.

Geeky Band Girl

Band Geek Love
By Josie Bloss

Her trumpet section thinks she’s scary. She screams a lot and constantly threatens them. She’s a COMPLETE obsessive control freak. Ellie Snow couldn’t care less. Ever since that day freshman year when she made such a fool of herself over her best friend’s older brother -- in front of everyone at band camp -- Ellie’s shut down the dating drama, said bye-bye to boys, and has been driven toward her goal –to shine as the best trumpeter in her high school history. She’s section leader of the trumpets and first chair in band, and after four years of avoiding the emotional chaos of the hell known as High School, she’s on her way out.

Marching band means everything to Ellie – the strict cadences, right angles, and creased, perfect uniforms have been an oasis of sanity in her life. It may be out of balance to be All Band, All the Time, but if you say anything to Ellie about it, she might just go upside your head with her instrument. This is her life the way she likes it. Her goal is to make her Senior year be perfect – down to her trumpet solo at Homecoming – and nothing and no one will get in her way.

Unfortunately, all of Ellie’s plans are about to go up in flames.

You can control the way you play the trumpet. You can how much you practice, and you can control the way you march. You can’t control your heart, and Ellie’s has just started racing.

Connor Higgins is tall and gorgeous and plays trumpet like a pro. He likes her. And he’s a …sophomore. And if that isn’t enough, the boy she made a fool of herself over is… back.

Ellie’s in way over her head, and everything is out of control.

Readers may want to throttle acid-tongued Ellie because her perfectionism and cluelessness can be tiresome and at times she’s simply flat out mean. She’s not the most sympathetic of narrators, but when four years worth of drama catches up with her, Ellie’s insecurities as she negotiates the new world of emotions are pathetic and realistic. Anyone who has tried to control what other people think of them will recognize the flailing and freaking out that Ellie does as she realizes that the world is what it is, and she’s not in control of anything.

Connor Higgins at times comes across at times as ridiculously well-rounded, mature and wise for fifteen, and Ellie’s parents are conveniently one-dimensional until the end of the novel, but taken all together, this is a bumbling, geeky little love story that may make you smile.


This review was first published in the March/April '08 issue of The Edge of the Forest Children's Literature Monthly.

The Mark of Solomon

If you haven't read Elizabeth Wein's The Lion Hunter, it's okay -- because the ending of the first in the duet titled The Mark of Solomon ended with such a cliffhanger that I don't know how readers made it through the year they had to wait until the sequel! Now that it's out, though, run don't walk, to your local library and bookstores and get started.

Telemakos, far from his home in the port kingdom of Aksum, is suspected of being a spy, caught listening at doors, and snooping through the desk of the king and federator of the Arabic lands. In this way, he has discovered that the najashi Abreha has been collecting all of the letters from home he's been receiving. Terrified that there's much going on that he doesn't know, and frantic that his life is forfeit should he be caught informing Goewin or his father -- and thus the Emperor of Aksum -- of the treasonous quarantine breakers which Abreha is harboring, Telemakos does not know what to do. The knowledge he has must get home, yet Abreha makes him read aloud every letter and signs it with his signet. He also carries in his sash a death warrant for Telemakos, with a lock of his silver-whitehair knotted in its wax seal. The line Telemakos must walk is very, very treacherous indeed. Yet he must warn his Emperor...

The Himyar mapmaker to whom Telemakos is apprenticed has set him at a task which betrays the Emperor and his own country, and now he must face the worst punishment of his life -- not seeing Athena, his sister, for three months. He hears her toddler screams from below his chamber for weeks, since the nursery is below his rooms. She is inconsolable, biting and scratching and tantruming all day. And Telemakos wakens from his sleep at night, terror and memory no longer held at bay. Only his training as a soldier and a warrior helps him keep his sanity, and training Abreha's lion. He is not allowed out without a guard, no longer has Abreha's confidence, and does not understand what the desert king could want from him. Why is he treating him in this way? What's behind it all?

When Telemakos' father, Medrut, finally comes, Telemakos realizes the depth of Abreha's duplicity. There sits his father, a scion of Britain, in chains! Why has he refused to allow his father to be the British ambassador? Why won't he allow Telemakos to communicate with anyone at all? When will someone come and let Telemakos and Athena, who is in grave danger, go home? Telemakos makes a sacrifice which seems to betray both his Emperor and himself -- but it will put his innocent little sister out of harm's way.

The Empty Kingdom is book two of Telemakos' tale of suspensful adventure in sixth century Ethiopia. Telemakos may have been a pawn in the game, but he makes the moves of a grandmaster, and in a single stroke, wins it all.

Many novelists write detailed novels of intrigue and beauty about ancient countries, but few remember that in the sixth century it wasn't only the Britain which had kingdoms and palaces and princes and rulers and intrigues. Far from portraying Ethiopia and Arabia as a collection of ignorant peoples in a dusty place, Elizabeth Wein has colored in the sepia-toned maps of history and produced a really great series. Pick it up -- you'll be glad you did!

Arthur in Ethiopia?

I'm not a big fan of Arthurian myth -- Knights of the Round Table, Holy Grails, faithless Lancelot, mysterious Merlin, evil Morgaine, the magical time of chastity and chivalry in the flowering of Britian has been done and done, and done to death. Thus it was not with any enthusiasm that I picked up Elizabeth E. Wein's The Lion Hunter. Why on earth would adding sixth century Ethiopia to the legend of the Britons make it any better? Whose idea was this? I remained unconvinced that this would be a worthwhile book -- until about the fourth page.

Telemakos is twelve, smart, and good with lions. He's a minor noble, because he is also Artos, King of Britain's half Ethiopian grandson. He doesn't live in Britain, but in Africa, where he's been serving the Emperor with his life and health. The Emperor owes him a debt of gratitude for stopping some black-market salt smugglers who broke quarantine laws and endangered the whole country. He was captured there, and tortured, and he's just happy to be home and safe, playing with the Emperor's lions and waiting for his new sibling to be born. But safety is a fleeting shadow over the desert, and soon, Telemakos, for his own safety, and the safety of his family, must leave his beloved Aksum again.



His father and mother send Telemakos and his infant sister, Athena, to Abreha, the Emperor's brother and ruler of Himyar, with a lion cub in tow. The cub is a gift from the Emperor to Abreha. Himyar is a land on the edge of the Red Sea which was once at war with them, but with whom they have now brokered a fragile peace, and the cub should be a gift of great honor, if Telemakos can get him there in one piece. It should be safe in Himyar -- there are treaties and friendships in place, but Telemakos' aunt Goewin warns him that peace is sometimes only seen in words and on paper. Goewin is the Emperor's British mentor and queen of spies, and she should know. Abreha is tricky, Goewin says and bears watching, and in those words, Telemakos knows what he must do. He's been the Emperor's sunbird before, and knows the duties of a spy for the kingdom. But he doesn't realize how easily a sunbird can be snared.

Details of the dusty and ancient are suffused with life as The Lion Hunter unfolds. Elizabeth Wein has combined research and vivid imagination to create an Africa which vies with ancient Britain in majesty and glittering intrigues. The reader is reeled into a tale of tautly strung danger and deep suspicion that encircles Telemakos and share in his painful struggles to mend and master his mind, to overcome terror, and be the Bright One najashi Abreha names him to be. As he cares for his difficult but beloved little sister and begins to feel a tentative kinship with the stern and brooding Abreha and the salt-rich kingdom where he is, the trap that has been set for Telemakos draws in closer and closer...

Monday, April 28, 2008

Changing...For Better and For Worse

The title of Barbara Shoup's recently re-released novel Wish You Were Here is just so incredibly right on. With it printed on a tape cassette on the cover design, it brings to mind the lyrics to the Pink Floyd song of the same name: "How I wish you were here / We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl year after year." And this book is about a lost soul: Jackson Watt, about to start his senior year, is still having trouble coping with the divorce of his parents--an immature father who's a roadie and stage crewman for countless classic rock bands, and a mother who's about to get remarried and throw a new stepdad and two new stepsisters into his life.

Then his best friend Brady takes off. And doesn't come back. Jax knows he's probably off trailing the Grateful Dead around the country (the book was originally released in 1994, before Jerry Garcia died), but Brady doesn't bother to get in touch with him or even his own parents. Jax is left to deal with senior year and his new stepfamily, his father's accident, a long-distance girlfriend, a clingy and troubled short-distance girlfriend, you name it--all on his own.

Brady would have told him to just forget about all the bullshit. But Brady isn't there. And Jax is starting to wonder if he really ever knew his friend at all. Wish You Were Here is a wrenching and very realistic story about a nice guy who ends up with a rather long playlist of life's problems suddenly dumped on him. Most people wouldn't cope too well, and Jax makes his share of mistakes, but ultimately this is a story of losing oneself in order to find oneself. It does not pull punches. And contrary to what it says on Amazon in terms of age recommendations (12 and up for PW; Grade 8 and up for SLJ), I'd probably say that 14 and up/Grade 9 and up is a bit more appropriate, considering the sex, drugs, and rock 'n' roll.

Instant Karma Is Going to Get You

Horace Carpetine is almost fourteen, and his dream is to become a practitioner of the relatively new (in 1872, that is) science of photography. When he's apprenticed to Mr. Middleditch, he hopes to do his parents proud, but Mr. Middleditch isn't quite the reputable and upstanding society photographer that he claims to be. Still, Horace decides to make the best of it, and do his best to learn the finer points of photography.

One day, however, a strange servant girl appears at the offices of Enoch Middleditch, inquiring about a photography session that her mistress has requested. But when Horace and his employer meet with Mrs. Von Macht--in mourning for her recently deceased daughter--they sense that all is not well in the household. The servant girl, Pegg, implies as much to Horace. They soon become friends, and Horace realizes that there's far more to the Von Macht family than appears on the surface. And things REALLY start to get creepy when Horace's photographs reveal the ghostly image of Eleanora Von Macht.

I'd never read anything supernatural by the versatile Avi, but his latest book, The Seer of Shadows, shows that he's not only a master of bringing past history to life (we already knew that!), but also skilled at evoking suspense and mystery. I enjoyed the level of detail he invests in helping the reader visualize the New York of the past--not just the sights and sounds but also the very flavor of the language. This is a fast-paced and deliciously thrilling ghost story, with an underlying theme of friendship nicely woven in.

Sunday, April 13, 2008

Musical Youth

This book was a 2007 Graphic Novel Cybils Award Nominee.


(If you can name that musical reference in the post title, by the way, I'll be impressed. And we'll both be old.)

Four Italian teenagers. One drummer, a wanna-be Nazi. One singer, a hypochondriac. One bassist, the quiet one. And the guitarist--our narrator, Giuliano. When Giuliano's dad lets them hold band practice in an old garage on their property, their Garage Band really seems like it's going to take off. The one condition for using the garage is that they stay out of trouble.

Unfortunately, this is four teenage boys we're talking about, each with their own set of troubles--an absent father, overbearing parents...and, soon, a burned-out amp. If they don't replace the amp, they won't be able to record their demo tape. However, their search for a new amp lands them in even more hot water.

Divided into five "graphic songs," this graphic novel by Gipi is a deceptively simple story with a number of subtle and complex undertones. The artwork reflects this nicely, with its loose, slightly jagged ink drawings and neutral-toned watercolor washes. Above all, it's very real--like life, it contains humor, sadness, pain, fun, and consequences. Don't miss the sketches at the back--a nice glimpse into the creative process.

Monday, April 07, 2008

Monsters Aren't All Alike


If you enjoyed Foundling, the first book in the Monster Blood Tattoo trilogy by D.M. Cornish, then you'll be happy to hear that the second book, Lamplighter, continues to deliver on the richly developed story started in volume one. Though the beginning of the book felt a little detail-heavy with respect to the setting and world-building, after a couple of chapters I was drawn in yet again to the adventures of Rossamünd Bookchild.

Rossamünd has finally settled in to his training as a prentice lamplighter at Winstermill, the main facility for the schooling of lamplighters in every aspect of their service to the Empire. Besides military-type drills and classes in theory and chemistry relating to lamplighting, there's the actual lighting of the lamps—troops of prentices accompany fully-fledged lamplighters on their rounds, lighting the lamps at evening and dousing them in the morning. That's the way it's been for ages.

But everything is starting to change, as things tend to do. Firstly, the manse at Winstermill has taken in their first female prentice: Threnody, the daughter of a noblewoman and calendar. Calendars are women who roam the country defending its citizens from monster attacks and other troubles, either by traditional firearms or by the augmented mental powers of a lazhar. Threnody happens to be a type of lazhar herself—but an untrained one whose powers are more harm than help. So she's decided to become a lighter, to the consternation of her uncompromising mother.

Another thing that's been changing is the increase in monster attacks—theroscades—along the lighted Wormway that wends its course across the lands. Rossamünd first encountered Threnody during one of these unexpected theroscades, and there are more attacks to come. And when Rossamünd and Threnody are sent by the scheming Master-of-Clerks to the furthest, most dangerous outpost of the Wormway, they realize that more is afoot than simply a random increase in monster attacks—and that life isn’t nearly as simple as they thought. "Monsters bad, humans good" just doesn't seem to apply as neatly as they were raised to believe.

As with the first book in the series, Lamplighter is filled with rich detail and a thoroughly developed world with its own mythology, social structures, and history. It might be a bit much for those looking for a fast-paced adventure, but for those who like to savor a complex, layered, and fully realized setting, this book is astonishing in its level of detail. The story doesn't disappoint, either—once it really gained momentum, I was thoroughly caught up in Rossamünd and Threnody's adventures and developing friendship. A very strong second installment in the trilogy.

More Than Just a Spud


I was really excited to read John Van De Ruit's Spud--I'm not sure I've ever read any young adult fiction by a South African author. While I was reading I couldn't help comparing the overall aesthetic, the way certain topics were treated, etc., to the way those topics are handled in American or British or Australian YA lit. Most of all, I was fascinated by how the school system differs from the traditional American public school system—for this is a story about thirteen-year-old John "Spud" Milton's experiences at boarding school.

To me, it seems much like British prep school. Spud (so named by his peers because of his, erm, modestly endowed and not-fully-developed male region) is a scholarship student at a reputable school, where he goes to live with a colorful, varied, hilarious, and sometimes over-the-top cast of characters. Nearly every one of his new dorm-mates has a nickname, flattering or not—Rambo, Fatty, Earthworm, Gecko, and so forth—and everyone gets into some kind of trouble or another on a regular basis. Bossy prefects, disastrous rugby matches, infantile pranks, and neurotic roommates are de rigeur.

But this story has its serious side, too, and Spud, though he gets teased mercilessly, is also admired—by teachers for his thoughtfulness and quiet potential, by his fellow students for his friendship and his talents as a singer and actor in the school musical production, and by his first-ever girlfriend. He has to deal with an array of parental dramas, romantic traumas, joys, and griefs, and he's occasionally tripped up by his own faulty judgment—just like anyone else.

Written in diary form, Spud is funny, a little crude (would you expect less from a teenage guy?), and definitely eye-opening, and Spud himself has an endearing, clear-eyed perspective that's also still very innocent and goodhearted. I was very pleased to note that there will be a sequel to Spud's misadventures.

Friday, March 21, 2008

Write a Sequel, Dang It!

You know, when you read the notes to a novel and they tell you that this fantastic book you just read was really just sort of a lark, a one-off, a side project that didn't quite make it elsewhere...that's enough to frustrate any reader. Evidently that's the story with Interworld by Neil Gaiman and Michael Reaves, and let me just say this--Neil? Mike? Do me a favor and get going on that sequel, please. Pretty please?


Interworld is the story of Joey Harker. To be precise, it's the story of many Joey Harkers. One day, Joey gets lost on a school field trip and finds himself...somewhere else. It looks like his town. Kind of. Until he gets chased by crazy hoversurfers who try to shoot him, and then saved by some mystery dude named Jay, and then discovers, upon returning home, that he DOESN'T EXIST AT ALL in this world.


A fun, fast-paced, and suspenseful take on the idea of parallel worlds and analogous selves, Gaiman and Reaves have created a compelling tale. It is possible to tell from the execution of the piece that it didn't necessarily get the attention it deserved--I think there's huge potential for the premise and characters that wasn't quite fully developed. Having said that, I really enjoyed it. If you're a Gaiman fan, and you like the type of sci-fi that sort of delves into fantasy at the same time, you'll probably like it. It was exciting, imaginative, and I'd be more than willing to read more about the adventures of Joey Harker and his various analogue selves--the wolf-girl, the cyborg, the girl with wings, the levitating guru. And don't forget the interdimensional bubble-creature who communicates in...colors. Much, much fun.

Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Learning To Breathe Under Water

*"When you sit in silence long enough, you learn that silence has a motion. It glides over you without shape or form, but with weight, exactly like water."


Magdalena even has a name which is lyrically beautiful. Her world is unusual, quirky, magical -- all because of her mother. Magdalena was content to sit quietly and simply absorb all that the world had to offer, but now that her mother has died, she's cast adrift, in more ways than one. Her dull Aunt Hannah comes and fixes mushy, tasteless dinners for she and her father. He goes to work, she goes to school, and all the magic has left the world.

Windows attract Magda -- why should she use a door? The spaces in silence call to her, and at times it's like she loses her voice. Flame is mesmerizing, and so beautiful.

Magdalena knows she's sliding toward the edge. The family of imaginary fish that she sees everywhere, the fact that the faces around her morph into animals, and she herself occasionally turns into a giraffe -- these things let her know that she is, in fact, a little out of her mind. And then there are the fires... But there's too much in her mind to stay there. Her father is trying to Move On, meeting with the horribly plastic and optimistically cheerful Dorothy, and her son Andrew. All Dad can remember of her mother is that she was depressed; Dorothy says Magda's mom and dad were outright unhappy before the 'accident.' Of course, cheerful and optimism are Dorothy's middle name. Not truth.

Never truth.

There wasn't any accident, was there? Not for anyone.

Why is everyone -- including Magda -- lying?

A dark, quiet descent into one girl's private watery grave, The Shape of Water takes a collage of losses and everyday aggravation and turns them into a surprising poignant hope that eventually, even the darkest water clears, and those who drown in the sea of grief can also remember how to swim and find their way back to solid land.


*This quote was taken from an uncorrected proof which is subject to change before final publication. Available April 2008.

More Elusive Than A Scarlet Ibis

The Ever-After Bird, by Ann Rinaldi

Thirteen year old Cecelia McGill will never be an abolitionist. It consumed her father’s attention, made him unmindful of her and cruel, and it eventually killed him. Cece resolves that she will never become so fixated on people she doesn’t even know, and neglect the ones right next to her.

After her father’s funeral, her Uncle Alex, also an abolitionist, greets Cece with tenderness and honesty. So unlike her own father, Uncle Alex seems to genuinely want to bring her to live with he and his wife, to help heal some of the scars left by her cold, unfriendly father. But first, he has a little trip he’d like to take Cece on. He, together with his assistant, Earline, is going to the deep South. He’s a budding ornithologist, and he’s looking for the Ever-After bird, what the slaves call the exceedingly rare scarlet ibis, a bird Cece’s uncle would dearly like to catch, kill, and paint.

Earline is a freed slave and a student at Oberlin College in Ohio, who, on trips to the South, pretends to be Alex's slave, working as his assistant and giving him access to the slaves on the plantations. As they journey, Cece is troubled to discover that she is both repelled by and afraid of Earline. For all that her father was an abolitionist, she has never spoken to a person of African descent. Worse, it is all too easy to pretend that Earline is her slave. Bossing her around and slapping her seem to be almost second nature. Piling more troubles on Cecelia’s young shoulders is the realization that her Uncle Alex is secretly spreading the word about the Underground Railroad and distributing money to help many of the slaves on the plantations they meet escape!

While much of the novel is straightforward, the reader cannot help but interpret Earline’s sly pettiness as an infatuation with Cecilia’s Uncle Alex, and then as an emotional dysfunction which Uncle Alex repeatedly explains away, making it clear that Earline is ‘damaged’ and not to be blamed for her bouts of temper and meanness. Earline is repeatedly depicted as someone ignorant, and more ruled by emotion than by intellect. She slaps the young and recently bereaved CeCe on some pretext, insinuates that she has more personal information about Cecelia’s immediate family than she does herself, lies about Uncle Alex, and openly schemes to remain central in his affections, despite the fact that she is both older and allegedly more educated and exposed to the way the world works than young Ceceila. The drama of the first-person narrative, in which CeCe sees up close the horrors of slavery are tensely riveting; the extemporaneous “female jealousy” problem, as Uncle Alex calls it, seems largely unnecessary and distasteful, pointing, as it does, to the idea of the infantile Southern woman, living her life only to scheme and catfight over a man.

One also wonders also if the author is inadvertently giving credence to the belief many Southerners held that persons of African descent were mentally inferior by birth, and would never, despite education, approach the level of intellect that a person of European descent could hope to achieve, as their ‘treacherous’ and hypersexualized ‘animal’ natures would ever catch them out. Earline, knowing the peril that they, as abolitionists, face in the South, nevertheless meets, falls in love, and in a secret slave ceremony marries a White carriage driver they encounter halfway through the journey. When in the novel’s dramatic climax, he is killed, she weeps and carries on and has to be drugged, dragged shrieking to a couch in stereotypical Southern belle fashion.

Though this dramatic novel will hold the interest of many young adults with its tumultuous view of slavery, its historical accuracy is dubious at best, and while the novel’s rapid conclusion neatly ties up all dangling strings, as a whole this novel leaves a lot to be desired.


This review was first published in the February '08 Edge of the Forest Children's Literature Monthly.